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Space Girl by dierat Space Girl by dierat
Kinda inspired by Star Trek, of which I've been watching waaay too much lately.

Photoshop CS2. Crit welcome.
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very nice detailing on the skin and face :) I think you've done a good job of capturing the setting and space thing but she kind of looks like she's floating a little bit... Like her foot doesn't really have anything its standing on. That could probably be fixed by adding some more footholds and jutting bits to the rock, or to angle her foot a different way, because the rock looks steep, but her foot doesn't look like it's matching.
Just one other thing, her back leg looks a little out of proportion, it looks much smaller than her front leg and kinda seems like, her foot shouldn't dissapear completely.
I like the highlights on her chest/neck area... but the light should also be on her arm (the light source seems to be directly above it). To me, it seems the highlights should be on the left of the drawing, and not so much on the right (unless there's additional light sources). I think just adding a little bit of highlight on the left side of her face and the top of her arm... plus the gun, will help the overall look of the drawing :)
All that being said, clearly you have talent and have done a good job :)
P.S, I like the mist :P hehe
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First time writing a critique in this manner, so here we go. xD

I do like this over all. Really. Love the color of her dress/suit and how the gun actually matches it. Doesn't seem like a practical outfit to go climbing rocks in, but that's not really the point.

Agree with the previous critique on the highlights and how her leg seems to be floating. You could angle her foot down instead of at the outward angle, so she's pushing herself up or about to. I do wish the image was a little brighter, which is why I rated you a little lower on impact, since it doesn't have a real air of danger or the like to me. I am curious as to what she's aiming her gun at, though!

I do like your misty effects. They're lovely. There seems to be something off about her folded leg to me, though...like you should be able to see part of her foot or something.

Anyway, overall I do like the image :aww: Are we going to get to see her again? Also, you can never have too much Star Trek. :meow:
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Amazing! I thought it was a scene from star trek and was thinking I was crazy until I clicked on it. Great job! Looks like it could be an exact scene from there!
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dierat Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2010   Digital Artist
Thanks! :D :heart:
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Seleenee Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2010  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
wow, this one is really nice!:clap: i like the shading and the posture.. and the tone of colors you've chosen.:love: it's realistic and still futuristic. also, background looks poorly. you could play more with it, because it kind of decreases the level of whole picture. but i still like it:)
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dierat Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2010   Digital Artist
Thanks, I appreciate the crit! :)
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Seleenee Featured By Owner May 17, 2010  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
no prob:hug:
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Moondustdreams Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I agree about the lighting and the leg. its very beautiful.I love the lighting on her face,chest,and the outfit rocks. i can see you got alot of talent, nice work
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dierat Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2010   Digital Artist
Thanks, I really appreciate the detailed comment! :D
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miycko Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2010  Professional Digital Artist
what a beautiful work of art :love: i am immediately drawn to her wonderful bust :D

some crits, i think the rocks could be a bit more hard edged & her left hand disappears too suddenly behind the rock, maybe you could draw her fingers so that it looks as though she using that hand to balance as well.

cheers
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dierat Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2010   Digital Artist
Too true! I'll definitely try to fix the hand and the rock.. I just kinda ran outta steam on this but I'll try to get back to it soon. Thanks for the crits! :D
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tndrhrtd37 Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2010
Beautiful...
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dierat Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2010   Digital Artist
Thank you :) :hug:
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RobertMakes Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2010  Professional General Artist
Awesome. This reeks of sixties sci-fi. Great job.

-Robert
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dierat Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2010   Digital Artist
Awesome, thanks! :)
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hexthor Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2010
sexy :D
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dierat Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2010   Digital Artist
Thanks! :D
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Gladiot Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2010
No modern digital or brush artist should lack a space girl in their portfolio. Thank you for fulfilling your requirements.

Nice use of backlighting. The silhouetting, especially of the arm, is an interesting and dramatic choice. The muted colors also add to the spacey, not-of-this-world quality but in a realistic way. Good retro look, especially in the laser-phaser-disrupter gun.
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dierat Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2010   Digital Artist
Thanks, I really appreciate the detailed comment! :D
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ZhouRules Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2010  Professional Digital Artist
beautiful! definitely reminds me of old school star trek haha. i do homework really late and next generation comes on late at night so ive been watching a little of that.
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dierat Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2010   Digital Artist
Oh man, I used to watch TNG while doing my homework too! That really takes me back. And when that wasn't on, I'd pop in a VHS tape of The Smurfs my brother recorded for me off Cartoon Network. Those were the days! :D
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ZhouRules Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2010  Professional Digital Artist
haha VHS. ah the good old days. I had VHS recordings of my favorite shows too. I wasn't into the smurfs though. But I recorded Space Ghost, Johnny Bravo, Dexter's Lab, and all those cartoons back when cartoon network was good.
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